Breaking My Heart - Hurting Haiku
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i’m breaking my heart
is it the right thing to do
do it for me please
churning guts and heart
and i the one who said go
on my own again
on hearing your voice
I know it was right so why
do I feel so low
some days are just fine
up and down like a yoyo
hope the string is strong
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Russ,, that was touching, what a way you have of making others feel what you feel...im finally getting the hang of the hub and wrote a second poem yesterday...keep these heartfelt ones coming..
Thank you, you too!
Russ....Wonderful use of the 5-7-5 meter...are you sure you don't have a Japanese poet somewhere in your family tree..?
Thank you for this ...exquisite, my friend...Larry
Thanks Larry, much appreciated! (:
I am a big fan of Haiku. Loved this.
tonymac04 2 years ago
Beautiful Russ - you are so good at these! I am rather envious!
Love and peace
Tony